Hi Michael, I really enjoyed your story especially the part when you explained what your favourite part was and why. To improve on your great story you could put in what else did you do and who you were with. Other than that you have written an excellent story about your Matariki day. From Gerry.
Hi Michael, I really enjoyed your story especially the part when you explained what your favourite part was and why. To improve on your great story you could put in what else did you do and who you were with. Other than that you have written an excellent story about your Matariki day.
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wow this is really cool it looks like you had a lot of fun by the way i'm maddi from papakaio school what was your favourite part of that day.
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